Tough to Love

I am dirty,
I am broken.
I am smudged
I am soft spoken.
Its tough to love a guy like me...

I am not what you say,
My tongue speaks words ill-behaved.
My mind seeks your name,
But my heart fails again.
Its hard to love a guy like me...

I am not handsome
I am not strong,
I am not fast,
And I cannot last that long,
In the storm of what is wrong.
Its tough to love a guy like me...

Though,
Your gaze,
Never changes.
It is beautiful
And always amazes me.
Even if a haze of sin
Makes a maze of my heart.
Just a simple touch of your love,
Sends me into a daze.
Into a world not far.
A work of your art.

I am like a jewel unclean to you.
Dirty and Smudged.
Broken and Crushed.
Misled and Decieved.

Take me into your collection.
Send me on the path of eternal correction
I wont ask you any more questions
Because you have the answers.

I love that you love me.

(second attempt to post this,after waiting a week and a half for the other to get approved.)

Comments




  • you have an amazing talent, i love your poetry!
    thenewway, 2 years ago | Flag
  • wow you are really good!!!! :-)
    momonikey, 2 years ago | Flag
  • dude ur an amazing writer! seriously! its crazy how good u are! but then i guess it's not just you, it's God too so duh it's good!
    Audria, 2 years ago | Flag
  • JamieLynn
    JamieLynn, 2 years ago | Flag
  • u know how i feel about htis one! lol
    JamieLynn, 2 years ago | Flag
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